Inside Out–a Poem

Inside Out

A wizened old lady

Once looked at me

And proceeded to say

What my frivolous

Youth could not see

Your taut skin

Resembles peaches and cream

Your shinning beauty

Will make men’s eyes gleam

Enjoy these gifts

For they are not permanent

And as the years pass

You will experience

Diminishing complements

Take comfort my dear

The tarnishing of beauty

Will make evidently clear

That “what” exists within

Signifies your true nature

With this knowledge,

Enjoy the rest of your future

About Lafemmeroar
Writer, blogger, humorist. Visit my blog to know more :)) Laughing at the malfunction of the universe is better than crying about it.

13 Responses to Inside Out–a Poem

  1. Posky says:

    You should have told that old lady to shut up.

    • Lafemmeroar says:

      lolol … but why?

  2. Nina says:

    The poem is lovely!

    • Lafemmeroar says:

      Thank you 🙂 Glad you liked it.

  3. Nina says:

    This reminds me of a poem by Herrik called ‘to the virgins to make much of time’ Though it’s very differently written but similar in the theme.

  4. And that’s why beauty comes from within right? It’s a wonderful poem.

    • Lafemmeroar says:

      That’s right! Then again there are some who are beautiful on the outside and down right grotesque within. You are beautiful on the inside and out,;hence your positive interpretation of the poem. Thanks for your comments 🙂

  5. Beautiful Poem! Loved it!

    • Lafemmeroar says:

      Thank you for reading and visiting … hope to see you soon. Cheers

  6. magsx2 says:

    What a great poem, and very well thought out.
    Thank You for visiting my blog.

    • Lafemmeroar says:

      Thank you 🙂

  7. ericmvogt says:

    Very positive! Love it, Noodles!

    • Lafemmeroar says:


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