Falling in Love

March 2, 2013 25 Comments

with every word you said

that never lived up to its meaning

I’ll fall in love

with every promise you made

that turned out empty

I’ll fall in love

with each cunning praise

meant to maneuver my mind

I’ll fall in love

when you disappeared from me

and i searched for hope 

I’ll fall in love

when i finally realize

that you were never real

I’ll fall in love again

with

ME

heart

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Writer, blogger, humorist. Visit my blog to know more :)) Laughing at the malfunction of the universe is better than crying about it.

25 Responses to Falling in Love

  1. Lorna's Voice says:
    March 2, 2013 at 8:07 am

    I wondered where this poem was going. Now it makes so much sense. In the final analysis, the only person we can truly rely on is ourselves. Well, maybe our dog… 😉

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    • Lafemmeroar says:
      March 2, 2013 at 8:14 am

      I don’t have a dog so it will have to be me! 🙂 Thanks Lorna for always being there 🙂

      Reply
  2. My Inner Chick says:
    March 2, 2013 at 10:15 am

    Love the ending (beginning) of this poem!

    Xxxx

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    • Lafemmeroar says:
      March 4, 2013 at 7:37 pm

      Thanks Kim. The ending surprised me a bit … it wasn’t the direction I thought I was going to go … but like life … it surprised me.

      Reply
  3. Patti Kuche says:
    March 2, 2013 at 2:09 pm

    I think I’m going to cry . . .

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    • Lafemmeroar says:
      March 4, 2013 at 7:37 pm

      Patti! Don’t cry … I’ll have to write a funny poem just for you now! Seriously 🙂

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      • Patti Kuche says:
        March 5, 2013 at 4:16 pm

        Seriously, thank you LFR! I’m just feeling sad and soppy for all the me’s that add up to us, all of us giving it our best shots . . . 🙂

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        • Lafemmeroar says:
          March 5, 2013 at 8:32 pm

          I love what you said “all the me’s that add us to us” 🙂 BTW Patti … you really need to join the Crazy Chicks Club! I’d like to do a Q & A with you …

          Reply
  4. Inion N. Mathair says:
    March 3, 2013 at 12:20 am

    Lovin this baby! A woman’s true strength and the only person in her life she can ever really count on! Sharing this now

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    • Lafemmeroar says:
      March 4, 2013 at 7:36 pm

      Thanks … yes “we” are really the only ones we can count on and if we don’t love ourselves .. who will?

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  5. countingducks says:
    March 3, 2013 at 4:55 am

    I don’t think we should entirely ignore the qualities of parrots when it comes to companionship, and some people speak very highly of hamsters , but dogs are certainly cute. There is so much compressed power and experience behind these words that I would love the ending to be different.

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    • Lafemmeroar says:
      March 4, 2013 at 9:51 pm

      Me too Counting … me too …

      Reply
  6. Valentine Logar says:
    March 3, 2013 at 5:16 am

    When we love ourselves enough, we have the freedom to love others. They can’t fool us or hurt us if we are strong enough.

    Wonderfully done. I am loving your poetry.

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    • Lafemmeroar says:
      March 4, 2013 at 7:35 pm

      Thanks Valentine 🙂 It’s been a while since I wrote “poetry” but I’m getting into the swing of it again. I need to do some funny one though … these serious ones are tough on the heart … know what I mean?

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      • Valentine Logar says:
        March 5, 2013 at 3:24 am

        I do know what you mean. I suspect though this is a way to blast your heart out there that is a gift to yourself and others.

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        • Lafemmeroar says:
          March 5, 2013 at 9:22 pm

          🙂 Valentine

          Reply
  7. Unconfirmed Bachelorette says:
    March 3, 2013 at 1:36 pm

    Wonderful!

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    • Lafemmeroar says:
      March 4, 2013 at 7:34 pm

      Thank you 🙂

      Reply
  8. nicoyagirl77 says:
    March 25, 2013 at 7:20 pm

    Reblogged this on Life According to Gizel.

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    • Lafemmeroar says:
      March 26, 2013 at 4:25 am

      Thanks Crazy Chick! 🙂

      Reply
  9. Phil Gayle_For Singles and Couples says:
    April 17, 2013 at 10:49 am

    Very nice…
    A book of poetry?

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    • Lafemmeroar says:
      April 20, 2013 at 2:25 pm

      I’ve been toying with the idea of turning some of my posts into an ebook with additional material …

      Reply
      • Phil Gayle_For Singles and Couples says:
        April 20, 2013 at 3:15 pm

        I always thought you had at least two good books in you…your poetry proves me right along with your tales of on-line dating. 🙂

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        • Lafemmeroar says:
          April 23, 2013 at 7:08 pm

          Thank you Phil 🙂

          Reply
  10. Scoop Jackson..."News 60" says:
    September 10, 2013 at 8:47 pm

    Hey Little Roar, I thought you divorced me! Great to see you among the living, loving, and laughing…

    Hey, you must have been hurt either pretty bad, or pretty often, or both in this stupid crazy world of romance. This poem speaks volumes, girl. Put it together with our witty banter thus far, and it makes my “polka-dots” stand on end!

    Enjoy your day, talk to ya later…
    Scoop 🙂

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